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Last but Most – How I do Erotic Horror Part 5

19 Apr

Hello again, dear friends.

This is the final installment of the How I do Erotic Horror blog series! Did you enjoy all the other parts? Do you like the series thing? Were you bored? Is anyone reading this, anyone at all? I HOPE so, and I HOPE you’ll comment, because this is your last chance to enter for a free copy of Sinful Truth and a SCARY GOOD GIFT!!

Okay, so where were we? Oh yes! I’d figured out the who’s of it all. The heroine, Bryerly, the mysterious anti-hero, Verum, and the villain, Rafe. But was Rafe really the villain at all? Or was he part of something much larger?

I used to read a lot of Kristen Lamb’s blogs, and she had a great series on antagonists, or Big Bad Troublemakers, as she likes to call them. She used the Star Wars movies (the REAL ones, not those modern pieces of tripe) as an example.

In the first movie, Grand Moff Tarkin was the bad guy. In the second, Darth Vader. And then the third was the true and final BBT, Emperor Palpatine. See, Tarkin and Vader were antagonists, but the weren’t the true villain of the trilogy. They were like bad-guy puppets for Palpatine to do his dirty work through.

While Sinful Truth isn’t a trilogy, this is still a useful idea to keep in the back pocket. Rafe was A bad guy, I knew that, but was he THE bad guy? When you write someone, you get to know them. As Rafe came to life under my tippity-typing fingers, he showed me his character. Greedy. Petty. Full of fear and want. The kind of person that makes others feel small to puff himself up.

Was this the mastermind villain of my horror story? The more I wrote of him, the more I discovered that he wasn’t. There was someone else there, pulling the strings. Someone much more calculating, someone who was more confident and self-possessed.  Someone who was willing to sacrifice anything to put himself at the top of the heap.

But serial killers aren’t exactly a new idea. And while I had brutal, bloody murders going on, the modern audience wouldn’t be impressed with such a simplistic display of violence. There was a cannibalistic element, yes, but why? Where’d it come from?

I despise it when you get to the end of a book and find out they were aliens all along, or something else out of left field. It irks the crap out of me. So I decided to tie another element in, an element that I’d already introduced via Verum. The Egyptian mythology element.

And THAT, my friends, is all I will say.

The women in Bryerly’s town are dying, one by one, their insides being eaten, not by wild dogs, but by men. The only chance Bryerly has to survive is Verum, the Truth Keeper. If you want to know how and why these horrific murders are occurring, then you’ll have to check out SINFUL TRUTH, releasing TOMORROW, April 20th, from Ellora’s Cave.

If you’d like to WIN a copy of ST, and a SCARILY GOOD GIFT, then you’ll post a comment below! I’ll announce the winner tomorrow. Good luck, and PLEASE let me know what you think of ST!

Tell me no lies- How I do Erotic Horror (part 3)

5 Apr

Thanks for stopping by again! For parts one and two of this series, click HERE and HERE.

So I had a heroine, Bryerly, and I had villains, Rafe and his crew. What and why they were doing what they were was still a mystery to me. But heck. Like all good pansters, I’d figure that out later. I had more delicious things to attend to.

I knew that my hero was a Truth Keeper. I wasn’t sure what that was, but I wanted to find a name that meant truth. So I went to Google’s translating tool and scanned through all the languages I could find til I settled on one I could make a name.

VERUM. It’s Latin. It’s sexy. It fit.

And once I had the name, I could see him in my head. Husband had been doing a lot of Insanity workout DVDs at the time, so there was a face and body that matched the idea of Verum perfectly for me.

Exhibit A, Shaun T, the creator of Insanity Workouts.

 

Mrow.

Okay. So who was he? What’s a Truth Keeper? Hmm. He’s dark, delicious, probably immortal, so he could have come from a long time ago. Someone called a Truth Keeper would probably be nearly omniscient. Maybe he could be Egyptian. Oooh, I loved that section of history. I trotted off to do some research about Egyptian Gods and Goddesses, thinking that if Verum could run afoul of the deity who represented Truth, that his punishment would definitely have something to do with that, right?

So here’s Ma’at!

 

from Wikipedia–

List of deities of Ancient Egypt

 

Ma’at – a goddess who personified concept of truth, balance, justice, and order – represented as a woman, sitting or standing, holding a sceptre in one hand and an ankh in the other – thought to have created order out of the primal chaos and was responsible for maintaining the order of the universe and all of its inhabitants, to prevent a return to chaos

Okay, so Ma’at would have the power and the motivation to curse Verum if he pissed her off. Got it. So he’s called to keep the truth of mankind. THAT’S why he was there when the murder was happening. He had to observe the truth. Perfect conflagration of hero/heroine/villain? Check. So how does one introduce sexy-sex into this mix? Obviously, murder witnessing doesn’t do a damn thing for libido. Unless you’re some kind of sick perv. If so, I don’t want to know.

So in the next segment, we’ll talk about how I twined these polar opposites together.

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